Short
Story 'Rinki’s tears'
Tribhubanjeet
Mukherjee / 28.03;2015 (Rama Navami) / Saturday / Night 9.40 P.M.
I had given the ground floor of my
house on rent to a newly married couple
. They were blessed with a little daughter. Her name is 'Rinki as they call . Rinki usually starts
crying when her mother leaves the home sharply by 9AM to office . She will be
crying for a long time. Her mother had kept a maid to look after Rinki and she
was very much caring and affectionate to that little girl . The name of the
maid is Mita. She use to come by 7’O clock in the morning and leaves the house
at 7 pm . She use to do all the house hold works of the
family right from cooking, keeping the baby , feeding her, washing clothes,
marketing etc. She use to come from Kestopur .
Our maid Manju says , Mita’s husband is a drunker and plays
teen patty, her son, Rahul , is a driver and the daughter-in-law 'Soma' a
tender teen aged girl of 16 years only. Mita’s husband is much older than her and spoils her savings
by drinking as Mita complains many a time .
We could know from Manju our made . I over hear these details when Manju
use to narrate to my wife. Don’t think I like PNPC but if some words vibrates
my ear drum with spicy news , how can I avoid it ? It is human tendency to
listen . I cannot avoid it .
Mita said her husband is an electrician with good
experience in house wiring etc . She was talking to my wife when she came with
Rinki the little lovely girl.
I was inside my room
with my computer . My wife was in a conversation with Mita . She use to
narrate how the girl always search her mother in and out . I can not keep the ears plugged with cotton. I
am writing what comes to my ear.
My wife, sometimes called Rinki and feed her
rice ,dal , fish and veg soup . We feel that we have a granddaughter with us .
I heard this morning Rinki was crying and
sobbing for a long period . I was very much angry and sad , job is more important for the lady than the
child ! But who am I to talk these
things ! It meant nothing for the couple
.
Parents of this generation are more ambitious . They
spend their life for earning more than the requirement . Rinki being deprived of
affection of her mother at the time of need . She suffers from cough and cold
,do not take food. Needless to say she suffers from the disease, especially in
the days of fever, and running nose. The
doctor listened to the parents ,
prescribes a long prescription with the drugs that made the patient more prone to
the disease as I feel. The medicines have got no sign of improvement rather
deteriorated the normal health condition of the child . During winter days , Rinki was much
suffering . Mita gave her head bath which she should not have done . I tried to convey this but I was
helpless so was my wife . Mita was not listening to our advice . I can’t understand about such unusual behavior of Mita .
All the time, Rinky says that her mother has said she will come with the chocolate while returning
from office . With the hope of chocolate
she is sitting near the door and she use
to crawl to the threshold just at the time of her mother’s return from office. It
takes a big surprise to hear, but it is
! When her mother returns from office ,
she gave less importance to Mita by ignoring her to take her on lap. She hold
her mother’s sari firmly and say not to to go office any more leaving her alone
. Poor girl's mother was at office and call over phone to Mita and get confirmed
about her lunch at proper time , whether
slept for a while or not etc etc.
Looking for someone to blame it on
the way to scrutinize because modern women become self-reliant ,they are
educated, possess equal capability to work with men in main stream , they want
to lead a decent life the result is the kid has to sacrifice her childhood
without the company of her mother . She is forced to stay with a lady who
renders her service for the sake of money without much attention to the
child’s need , losing her childhood.
Is this the modern era, the children
suffering , piles money to the wallet of
their parents ! I do not understand what
life they lead ! It's not clear to me. That is the reason , I feel the need of
joint family . We were brought up in an environment where our mother, aunt,
pisima(father’s sister) ,granny , grandpa use to stay in a joint family . The
absence of mother could not be felt by a child as everybody was there to look
after. The ease and delight in our age so we played in the sand dust. Today's
children are concealed in a room . They had to grow in a polluted environment , much prone to disease .
One day we hear that Rinki’s father
is going to USA from company . In a
software job one has to go USA or UK for promotion and
higher prospects . I think , now Rinki will have the company of her grand pa
and granny as they must be coming to
stay with their grandchild . She will go to the park and play there with
her granny . She will not feel alone and
have her company .
"Arunava , Rinki’s father came to me , the day before he went to
America . A very decent gentleman , tall
and well built , calm and polite in his behavior . Nowadays you won’t find a man like him .Took the dust of my feet and said, "Uncle, I'll be for a long time
to US on my project work , but I think
will complete before six months . Many do not understand the offer, my company
is sending me with special target. My wife and daughter were in the custody of
you, please see that they are safe . I think for Rinki as she suffers much .
She is prone to cold allergy.
I said
, do
not worry about anything, I am like your
father. What do you say? . I heard your parent are coming to stay . Rinki will
have her company and you will see all
disease will vanish and she will not cry for her mother .
Yes Uncle Sure! So I got to meet
you. My parents are arriving today.
I hope so. Uncle see a bit more .My parents
are new to this place . They may need your help.
Why do you think so ? It is my duty to help them .
Rinki is a promising chap . Don’t worry everything will be alright . We
all are here . Be okay. You have to achieve your target and may God bless you
to come out successfully .
Return if the project is completed .Best
of luck .
Thank you uncle. Sure, it will take six to seven months.
Let's see what happens ! Arunava took a long breath .
I understand that he is sorry to
leave Rinki . Not the way to go.
Arunava’s parents
came on evening flight. He went to Netaji International Airport , Dum Dum to
bring his parents . In one sense we are
all forgetting the traditional family get together and hulla
golla now a days . Life has become very much mechanical and monotonous in
nucleus family life of our children.
The next day Arunava went to
America. Their home was full of fun with a joyful atmosphere . We all went to
the airport for a send off to Arunava . Rinki didn’t understand what is going to
happen as she was very much comfortable on her mother’s lap .As usual she
thought her father is going to office but nothing to worry, as she has her
mother with her . That is enough for
her.
I could feel Arunava although had a
pale smile but much worried for his only child . Now skype will be
the only media to see Rinki live through laptop . Rinki’s granny and grand pa blessed their
only son with sobbing voice “valo vabe thakis baba , thik vabe khaoa daoa koris
, shorirer proty jotno nis”( Take care of your health )
Rinki’s grand
mother was much happy. Rinki was much happy as she got the
wormth of love and passion from her
granny . She took bath in a joy full mood , took her food , go to the park
with the other boys and girls, played there different sports for children. The park now has many elder sister and elder brothers of Rinki .
I have been to a lot of the animated look of Rinki. She use to say in a loud
voice “Ke elo
, meaning who has come?” It gave immense pleasure to me she is happy in absence
of her mother and never cries now . But as usual she asks for the Cadbury when
her mother arrives at home from office .
I must say over phone to Arunava , “See
how jolly she is ! Rinki loudly say the
Rhyme in her tender voice . When someone comes at home she will rush to the door, saying, Ke
Elo
? Grand mother taught Rinki ,Lal
jhunty kakayua koreche je bayna .. chai tar lal fite chiruni aar ayna
How helpless I felt myself when she
was crying loudly and how happy I am when she is loughing and playing loudly !
The way, there was nothing to do, but now ! Now, I'm sure! Arunava when I explained everything
to him and will say after his return from US , how much she needed her granny
grandpa !
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